Hi All
When I notify entrants that they are not the winner (everybody is told individually and it can be a long job as I invariably receive over twenty entries) the most common reply is ‘ thanks for letting me know, but it’s not the winning that matters, it’s good fun taking part and writing poetry’.
However, there are winners this month and they are Philip Celner for Barnet and Jeffery A Edmunds for Harrow and here are their poems.
A PET FANTASY BY JEFF EDMUNDS
I’ve always wanted a pet dog and a cat
My dog would be a chocolate Labrador
I love the breed’s go-getting impetuosity
Rather like me, really
I would call him George and he would be
a great companion to drag me out on
cold and wet days, get the conversation
going with others, about his doggy ways
My cat would be called Trevor and he
would be an accomplished ratter and keep
my garden vermin-free. He would be languid
in the sun, but alert to invaders, indeed!
Being two boys together my pets would
battle for my attention and sidle past
each other like scolded children. Trevor
would not like being annoyed by George
But they’d get along: Trevor with his secret
liaisons, George with his homely doggy ways.
Pets are lovely. They would keep me sane
But who would train who? Now, then...
Pets by PHILIP CELNER
‘You don’t have to be cuddly to be interesting’
David Attenborough
Pets are people too
domesticity is fur-deep
if only they could speak
their thoughts are pure
perhaps preverbal
apart from a tendency to sometimes bite
monkeys use tools
cats caress
they are the same in that they have eyes,
noses, teeth, ears
four sets of digits
four limbs
hearts, bowels, stomachs, kidneys
they are like children,
so let the children clean cages
tip in the cat-food,
pull on the leash
make hutches habitable
Some of our runners-up are:
MIKE LAWSON
A gap in the fence
let you invade my space
a welcome intruder
making home of my place
Easy to maintain. Feed on leaves
no complaints, serene and calm
doing what nature bequeaths
naturally sweet with a spiritual charm
I called you Timothy, did you know?
i don’t know why but it seemed to fit
our younger brains go with the flow
i had a feeling and I followed it
I don’t know if it was the same gap
or he thought you were a moving bone
I only know it as a great mishap
when Scamp tried to eat your mobile home.
A gap in the fence
led to a gap in your home
cutting short your serene life
leaving me sad and all alone.
PETS by Anthony Tischler
Dalmatians are not seen very often in public
They are a slightly rare breed
They are quite tame but can be a little ferocious at times
I have seen these dogs on TV ads
They make quite nice pets
A friend of my possessed quite a few of them
Security dogs are their own masters’ friends and pets
Where I live there are quite a few dogs about with their owners
and some of them I am pretty certain are security dogs
They are strongly built
I am a bit nervous of these dogs coming along in the street
They are very friendly but it is difficult to be calm in their company
There are two security dogs on leads
Probably just out to exercise
I don’t think they are the Drugs Squad
There are plenty of cats about with their owners
They keep mice away and birds
They are not such a nice special of animals
KUSUM HARS
He came to us a bundle of brown fur and two innocent eyes
From the home of his parents and siblings to our lives
We put him in his crate and watched to see what he would do
He sat there, looked around and watched us too.
That did not last, he was out and about soon
Hesitant at first but then ventured from his room
His favourite place was the garden, he went on a digging spree
Big holes appeared and the place was a mess I agree
Plastic bottles, flower pots and his toys whatever was seen
A little pup on a mission of rampage and chewing, ever so keen.
He stole our socks and other small wear from the stand
And chewed on them until he would be tired and bored
Hey where are my socks my daughter would shout
Looking around we would find them in his mouth.
We enjoyed his mad run and running with cushions twice his size
Marty came as a ray of sunshine and a warmth I cannot describe
He is a big handsome lab now connected to us in every way
Part of us and included in every moment of our life and day.
Enter the house and he greets us with our slipper in his mouth
Tail wagging and love in his eyes as he prances from north to south.
MY OWN PET by Ruheena Shah
As I was walking in the park
I saw under a tree, a little doggy
Drenched and shivering in the cold
Its body all wet and very soggy
I took out my woolly scarf
Over it I wrapped it round
It's shiny eyes looked at me
It's moan gave a thankful sound
I took him home and fed him
And put him beside the fire
Eyes closed he went to sleep
As he was hungry and tire
The next day I took his picture
Put it in my area, on all the trees
To see if any one will claim him
They can collect him from me
But no one came to own him
The doggy is now my friend
He has become my own pet
This is how with me he end
BLIND By Sukriti Bisht
Since I was 12 all I saw was the dark,
Then you came along, my candle, the spark.
Your lustrous, fluffy coat and long, floppy ears,
Were all it took to get rid of my fears.
Whenever I was with you, I couldn't help but grin,
Your cold, cold nose brought warmth to my skin.
We walked down the street, you by my side,
Obstacles big or small we took in our stride.
The jingaling of your bell as melodious and sweet,
As the echo at dawn of a bird's golden tweet.
And when we came home after a long day,
You would spawl across my lap and wash my worries away.
You brought colour and happiness to my world,
Without you, I'm incomplete.
I miss you...
ANTOINETTE GURA
Forever faithful
Love abound
Oh you mischievous hound
Warm heart, wet nose
This poem for you I compose
Explosive with delight
On my return
Constantly at my side
Especially at dinner time!
Now you are gone
The joy we have shared
Brings me happiness
For the years ahead.
PETS by Richard Adam
I wonder what Paddington and Francesca , our red orange goldfishes used to think about,
Swirling around the plastic bowl all day.
My aunt Joyce brought Prince, her black and tan German Shepherd,
From Blackburn, on a chilly snowy 1981 November.
Regal and never straying from my auntys side.
There was Teddy , born in 1984;bug cuddly and very furry, tongue panting like a happy husky.
She rescued starved Rosh and toothless Gina, epileptic Harry and frivolous Nancy and hypersensitive Honey.
The latter two outlived my aunty.
I wonder what happened to them.
Thoughts Of A Hungry Cat
Through the open door Tiger strides
His nose and tail held up high
As loudly for food he does cry.
He looks neither left nor right as he walks straight
He's hungry and with his food you mustn't be late:
Up to the fridge he continues to proudly stride.
He gazes up at you standing by the closed fridge door
He stares his green eyes pleading
Telling you quite clearly, 'I need feeding.'
He watches every move you make
'Now hurry up there for heaven's sake
I'm hungry, very, very hungry - go on, open that fridge door.'
He's becoming more impatient still
He knows if looks could kill
He would shock you by opening the door himself
He would steal every piece of meat from the bottom shelf,
Drag it along your nice clean floor
And proudly with his prize run out of the kitchen door
To eat his fill of the meat today
But unfortunately you're standing in his way.
©Patricia J Tausz
PETS by Howard Lambe
Some people like a frog
But most would prefer a dog
Others like a cat
Or even a pure white rat
Almost everyone wants a pet
Although you can't be sure of what you might get!
Hamsters and mice can be very nice
But who would ever consider a wood lice?
Tropical fish and carp are very colourful
Whereas a tortoise or turtle is not at all
Rabbits may need much grooming of their hair
And snakes and lizards require a lot of care
Pets come in many guises
A reptile could be quite a surprise
Little ones are quite taken by a guinea pig
Probably because they are not too big
Pets are a comfort and your best friend
When your not well they can help you mend
However not all pets are animals
For teacher's pet is found at school!
AMAZON SAMMY
By Derek Barretto
His plumage a lush verdant green
underfeathers a coarser blue tinged with rusty red
bright tropical yellow crest above a beak quite hawkish
yet his melodious chatter is seldom squawkish!
Age estimate: 42 years and counting
species and sex: Amazon parrot, male
repertoire ranging from an old lady’s chuckles
contentedly ending with ‘come on’ as peanuts he suckles
He’s a caged bird, his wings are clipped
we let him out daily he clambers up and down
with an undaunted but latent gift of flight
a bird so intelligent; any owner’s delight
Diet: sunflower seeds, all kinds of nuts and hemp
Temperament: very fond of repeating affirmatively
‘Oh what a good boy, bye-bye’
when we leave him alone he tuts a little sigh!
Hope you enjoyed them - next month’s subject is The Scenic Route. Look forward to receiving your poems.
Judy Karbritz
Harrow’s Community Poet
& co-founder Jewish Poetry Society
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